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The blue seas sparkle,
In crimson fury,
As the tangerine sun,
Descended on its waters.

The ocean waves unfurl,
Against the rocks below,
In perfect harmony,
With the seagull’s song.

I am shrouded in fire,
As the symphony ascends,
Splendor blinds me,
But I can hear its majesty.

The heavens once golden,
Turns purple like amethysts
The music fades,
As the first star arises.
©2005-2009 ~chambered-nautilus
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just imagine that you are at the beach, standing at a low cliff, watching the sunset.....

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:iconemila:
Wow. I really like this.
:iconblissful-nightmares:
you really are incredible

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98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your sig.
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks. =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks for the kind comment. =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconblissful-nightmares:
lol.. welcome

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- b - n -

98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch 'em, put this in your sig.
:iconlynwoodnita:
I love the fact that you're able to use that vivid imagery skill of yours throughout the whole poem. Very good, like usual.

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks for the kind comment. =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconblademaster-raven:
You don't even need that first comment, I can picture it just perfectly without it :D It's beautiful :D

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Baron Von Reichensteinsven III
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks, i guess the imagery is good enough. =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."

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