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I have waited,
A thousand years,
For this moment.

From the time,
Your eyes met mine,
I have longed for you.

Your face haunts me,
From my waking hours,
To my dreams as I sleep.

You caress my hand,
As you looked at me,
I feel so lost in your eyes.

You mumbled some words,
That I failed to understand,
I saw regret in your gaze.

Then I felt your hand,
Slipped from mine,
It became cold that instant.

You turned around,
And walked away,
Never to return again.

I will always remember,
This bittersweet day,
The day you said…

Goodbye…
©2005-2009 ~chambered-nautilus
:iconchambered-nautilus:

Author's Comments

It is against my style to write poems such as this one but i guess it is just a hangover from another lonely valentine's day or in my case, it was Single Awareness Day (SAD).

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:iconlynwoodnita:
(lmao SAD i had no valentine either T_T) Anyway very nice poem, very heartfelt.

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:iconblissful-nightmares:
well written.. not a big fann of the love stuff myself... i hate valentines day

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks.. that goes for both of us... =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thank you, dear. =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconareyoujecca:
love is all you need. daw.

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[ a champagne supernova in the sky ]
:iconchambered-nautilus:
"daw". =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconlilac-dreams:
got influence from me... hehe... SAD really bugs me a lot

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i have my life to live, to spend and to waste so just mind your own business...

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
sadly, it's SAD every year. =(

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconchainjamadas:
O this is sad. It starts off so sweet tho.
:tear:
very nice

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~No, no, I'm a good stranger!~

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