The very first woman,
Mankind’s gift and curse,
A gift for man to adore,
And the curse that plagues him.
Molded by Hephaestus,
Out of silt and clay,
The masterpiece of his hands,
Like man but different.
Zeus breathed her to life,
Athena made her intelligent,
There is no knowledge or craft,
She does not know.
The Graces made her charming,
Apollo endowed her music,
With a nightingale’s voice,
She could shame the Sirens.
Rivaling Aphrodite,
In beauty and grace,
With curiosity and cunning,
Of that of Hermes’ trickery.
Thereof her name,
That means all–gifted,
The finest creation,
Fashioned by the gods.
She was taken down to earth,
As a wife to Epimetheus,
Blinded by her perfect beauty,
He forgets his brother’s warning.
As a wedding present,
The gods gave her a box,
But she was firmly warned,
Never to open it.
The beautiful box,
Came form the very depths,
Of the realms of Hades,
Where all evil is sealed.
In her every waking hour,
She would trace her fingers,
On the box’s intricate design,
Curious of its content.
“A box so beautiful,
Must contain treasures,
Of equal loveliness”
She thought to herself.
She settled for a peek,
Her slender fingers,
Lifted the lid of box,
Freeing all evil.
Out came a dark cloud,
Like pestilent insects,
They spread in all directions,
She quickly closed the lid.
But not fast enough,
Greed, envy, wrath,
Vanity, indolence, pride,
And all evils are upon man.
The quandary of man began,
But still the box is not empty,
A lingering light remains,
Hope………















Comments
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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
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The only suggestion I can really give you is to double check some forgotten letters at the ends of words ( like when you said 'Zeus breathe life into her," I got the feeling it should have been "breathed".)
Also I would cut out that last one word line because it is unneccessary and I think well explained by the line before it.
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Probability probably doesn't even exist.
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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
And thanks for the fav!
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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
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