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The very first woman,
Mankind’s gift and curse,
A gift for man to adore,
And the curse that plagues him.

Molded by Hephaestus,
Out of silt and clay,
The masterpiece of his hands,
Like man but different.

Zeus breathed her to life,
Athena made her intelligent,
There is no knowledge or craft,
She does not know.

The Graces made her charming,
Apollo endowed her music,
With a nightingale’s voice,
She could shame the Sirens.

Rivaling Aphrodite,
In beauty and grace,
With curiosity and cunning,
Of that of Hermes’ trickery.

Thereof her name,
That means all–gifted,
The finest creation,
Fashioned by the gods.

She was taken down to earth,
As a wife to Epimetheus,
Blinded by her perfect beauty,
He forgets his brother’s warning.

As a wedding present,
The gods gave her a box,
But she was firmly warned,
Never to open it.

The beautiful box,
Came form the very depths,
Of the realms of Hades,
Where all evil is sealed.

In her every waking hour,
She would trace her fingers,
On the box’s intricate design,
Curious of its content.

“A box so beautiful,
Must contain treasures,
Of equal loveliness”
She thought to herself.

She settled for a peek,
Her slender fingers,
Lifted the lid of box,
Freeing all evil.

Out came a dark cloud,
Like pestilent insects,
They spread in all directions,
She quickly closed the lid.

But not fast enough,
Greed, envy, wrath,
Vanity, indolence, pride,
And all evils are upon man.

The quandary of man began,
But still the box is not empty,
A lingering light remains,
Hope………
©2005-2009 ~chambered-nautilus
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Author's Comments

In Greek Mythology, Prometheus and Epimetheus made man out of clay; Prometheus favored and loves man more then the Olympians. This greatly angered Zeus so he devised a plan for his thirst for revenge to be quenched.
Zeus set Hephaestus the task of creating a woman. Hephaestus worked and worked and created a masterpiece. Athena, goddess of wisdom made her intelligent and taught her to weave. Aphrodite the goddess of love made her beautiful. The Hermes the god of trickery taught her to charm and deceive. Apollo the god of the sun blessed her with music.
He named the woman Pandora meaning all-gifted and sent her as a gift to Epimetheus. Epimetheus had been warned by his brother Prometheus that he should never accept gifts from Zeus because it is more likely to be a trap. Epimetheus ignored his brother's warning, fell in love with Pandora and married her. Zeus, pleased that his trap was working gave Pandora a wedding gift, a beautiful box. With the condition that was that she never to opened the box.
Pandora often wondered what was in the box but she was never left alone so she never opened it. Gradually over a while she began to wonder more and more what was in the box. She could not understand why someone would send her a box if she could not see what was in it. It got very important to find out what was hidden there.
Finally she could stand it no longer. One day when Epimetheus was out she crept up to the box. She lifted the lid to peep in but before she realized it the room was filled with terrible things like disease, despair, malice, greed, old age, death, hatred, violence, cruelty and war and all other evils. She closed the lid quickly leaving the spirit of hope inside.

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:icontheblackline:
holy shit ( sorry if your offended) but dam this is awsome
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks! =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:icontheblackline:
your more than welcome this is amazing without a dought( i know i cnt spell)
:iconblahbeastie:
I love how you write these things... These little mythology poems they are very beautiful and well written in fact it is really fav material here.
The only suggestion I can really give you is to double check some forgotten letters at the ends of words ( like when you said 'Zeus breathe life into her," I got the feeling it should have been "breathed".)
Also I would cut out that last one word line because it is unneccessary and I think well explained by the line before it.

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Probability probably doesn't even exist.
:iconchaossubliminal:
Yes, this is definitely an awesome piece of work. It's awesome how you can take a story and just craft it into something so... pure. Good work!
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks for the comment! =D

--
"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks! =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:iconchambered-nautilus:
i was trying to write all the stanzas in four lines, i'll think of a better line for the last one, thanks for the tip! =D
And thanks for the fav! =D

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"Life may not be the party we hoped for,
But while we are here, we might as well dance....."

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