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The heavens tremble,
In waves of dark clouds,
Threatening to pour,
By each crack of thunder.

Gusts of wind,
Comb my long hair,
As I brace myself,
From its chilling snares.

I watch the storm unfold,
Standing still under its mercy,
The horizon blurs,
Along with my vision.

Drops of water,
Trailed down my cheeks,
I stared at the sky,
As it cries for me.
©2005-2009 ~chambered-nautilus
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inspired by the rainy days, its wet season here in the tropics...

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:iconlynwoodnita:
it's beautiful but you changed the structure of the poem. if you revised it it'd probably even better than it already is.

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks for your time to read! =D

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:iconlynwoodnita:
i always have time to read your work. even if i dont comment on it. lol

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks! =D

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But while we are here, we might as well dance....."
:icondarktribute:
awww, its seems like a sad rainy day to me but it also seems like it will get better =)

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:iconhidinshadow:
wow this is awesome! i wish i could write that good. i really like this, it seems like a rainy day.

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:iconemila:
Very beautiful, i like rainy days (:
:iconblissful-nightmares:
wow... i like it alot... it must be really beautiful there.. i love rain

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:iconchambered-nautilus:
thanks, i love rainy days too! =D

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